What is this I see?
The mother from whom I came,
She is angry with me,
And it puts my heart to shame!
Who will love me?
The wrong which I have done,
Makes me an evil thing to see,
And for this I have been shunned,
So who, I ask you, will love me?
I am not what she wants me to be,
Pure, proper, and a lovely thing indeed,
She does not see these things in me,
But someone of bad report, in ugly character and deed.
Who will love me?
The wrong which I have done,
Makes me an evil thing to see,
And for this I have been shunned,
So who, I ask you, will love me?
I see HIM, HE who loves me!
HE hangs there on a tree,
And HE takes all the blame for me!
So now someone loves me!
I know HE loves me!
And no matter what wrong I have done,
HE will make me clean and beautiful for all to see!
And I know that HE will never leave me alone,
For HE, I know, loves me!
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Shotgun Girl
Friday
Who will love me?
Posted by Country Girl at 4/30/2010 12:21:00 PM
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Beautiful Rachel! So well written! I wish I could write poems like that! Could you help me?
Well, to be honest with you kelly, this is the first poem I have ever written! lol Poems really need to come from the writters own heart, and ideas! Just make sure that the ending of every other line rymns with the second line up from that one, and your golden! It just takes thought! :) And I wrote this poem when I was sad, so i guess what you write also depends on the mood ur in! lol But I hope this helps you get an idea! ;)
Honestly Dear...there is nothing you could do to make me stop loving you. And I am so glad in my heart to see that you know that Christ is your salvation and that he loves you! Don't ever forget that!
3 John 1:4 I have no greater joy than to hear that my children walk in truth.
I love you very much!
Your Mother
Thanks Mom! :D I love you too! :D
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